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To: Al Henderson
Subject: Where Are Your Evaluation Forms???
I see that you're late with your line evaluation forms again. Your personal problems have resulted in an inability to perform your duties and are cutting down G sector's efficiency, putting us all behind schedule. Such laziness is beyond acceptable parameters and will not be tolerated. Get on it or get out.